Intrude from St Marylebone Media Studies on Vimeo.
We were really happy with our first draft however there were a few things we wanted to change and it made it clear we were right about them after showing an audience and receiving their feedback. This is our trailer after our feedback had been given. The feedback was mostly very positive! they understood the trailer and the genre of our film and reacted in the way that we wanted them to, scared, interested and intrigued...
We had to make a technical change of making our company production logo effect smaller to fit the screen and also to keep the text on the screen for longer as some people said they couldn't read it in time.
We also took away the scream and the heavy breathing in the end scene to see what it would look like if we cut all the sound effects and just left the it with the sound of the floor boards creaking. We thought this was more scary and interesting as the audience wouldn't know if our character woke up or if the stalker got away. However we also had to keep in mind that the scream did scare people and the effect of a trailer is to do so.
FEEDBACK
We created questionnaires to show the year 12s so we could ask them specific questions and get honest feedback.
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